The rock seems like it should have more detail since it's so central to the character, it feels like it lacks proper depth. The fish glow is a nice touch, but the character should have more complex lighting from the fish. I really like the stream meandering from behind the character, and the design and floppy cloth folds add a comfortable feel. :3
Oh, kinixuki is so lucky girl! I can't tell, how much she deserve this happines, what she felt seeing this one for the first time! There was times when I envy her this kind of - friendship - (I don't know how to call this. XD) with You... I mean that e-mail conversations. But now I'm happy with her, because... she is happy. Anyways... I have no idea why I'm writing this. XD I just wanna to say, that I really love this one, it just looks like Narya! Awesome!